Rate these lyrics

GThotie
by GThotie · 3 posts
6 years ago in Off Topic
Posted 6 years ago · Author
[Hook]
Try to rob, i'll get a n*gga gone
Before I walk outside, gotta grab the biggest pole
Hit him with the F&J now he aint got sh*t left to say

[Verse 1]
Coolin with a thot, she gone let me f*ckin bone
How you run the city boy you dont leave ya home!
Smoking on this boof, taking hits right to the dome
I was born finessing, catch deals on my phone
Keep the heater on your cause in the summer it get cold
Like a fat kid n*gga I got lots of rolls!
I spend all my money on my momma, nothing for these h*es
F*ck these hoes I switch them like I switch clothes (everyday)

[Hook]
Try to rob, i'll get a n*gga gone
Before I walk outside, gotta grab the biggest pole
Hit him with the F&J now he aint got sh*t left to say

[Verse 2]
All these like im the east atlanta santa
When it rains it pours keep you a umberella
Got a hispanic girl she invited me to quinceanera
Hate me on you is a hater
Thats a female trait
Two choppas on me and my homie thats a double date

[Hook]
Try to rob, i'll get a n*gga gone
Before I walk outside, gotta grab the biggest pole
Hit him with the F&J now he aint got sh*t left to say
Posted 6 years ago
Not too sure how the chorus goes? I think it's good, but It kinda sounds like you're stunting too hard. You've gotta kinda own it more. Moretime, not tryna throw shade seriously, but you wouldn't. If you try rapping about something that you feel a bit more comfortable with I think that the bars would shine a little more. I don't know anything but it was just a thought: Check these lyrics out for example:

My Gs will rise up to something
You don't want nothing-
We raising up all the bottles
Cork get to poppin for days-
We never had nada,
Just some noodle tomorrow,
For the stew and the spam and the plantain and now-
And now we jumpin the lobster,
with the linguini pasta
Me and bros in the rave, only smiles on our faces
We doin our Shakka, that's no drama no drama
With the watch presidential, that's Obama Obama

I dunno, it's just comfy to read.
Posted 6 years ago
yup the chorus seems a bit weird i shud say

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